Some Things To Remember About Writing

WRITING ADVICE

“Make sure you aren't wasting the reader’s time.” – Contributed by Ian Rash Using an online source called  The Minimalist , I learn...

Friday, July 27, 2018

Sport=Swim by Genevieve Cadwell

Free And Back
And Breast And Fly
Swimming In A Pool

Dolphin, Flutter
Kick, Kick, Kick
Swimming In A Pool

I’ve Been To Many Meets
You See
My Best Is Backstroke Too

I Love To Swim
And I Swim Fast
I’m Like A Fish In The Sea

My Mom Says I Swim To Much
And That I’ll Grow A Tail
On A Big, Bright Full Moon
It Might Just Happen So

War is a Blizzard by Britta Nathan

War is an eternal blizzard
Cold snow of pain swirling everywhere
Hurting everyone
Tears like sharp diamonds
Dangerous ice trapping everyone involved in fear
And everyone is involved

Lost in this freezing mess we have made of our world

I’m Really A Mermaid!!!!! by Genevieve Cadwell

I’m A Mermaid.
Can’t You Tell?
It’s Plain To See
I’m Fast On Land
But Watch Me In The Water
I’m Faster Than Ever
With My Mermaid Tail

Mine By Genevieve Cadwell

A Pen That Writes
A Light That Shines
A Epilogue To My Story
It Is Just Lovely Glory

The Pig in Her Bag by Britta Nathan


It was December, a busy month for the farmer’s market.  Mia trekked past the stands with her pig, Leo. He was named after Leonardo Da Vinci, Mia’s favorite scientist, and had been a birthday present from her late Grandmother.  Mia had ridden there on her rusty bike, with Leo in the basket. Leo was a tiny pig, but healthily plump. They had been sent by mother to get some beans. They secretly bought some honey from the honey stand. Then they got to the beans.
Mia got in line with Leo under her arm and fished for her money.  Soon it was their turn.
“Why, hello!  That is quite the pig!  Think I could buy it off you?  Where are your parents?” The person at the stand looked around.
“He is not for sale, and my parents are at home.  Now could I have some beans, please?”
“Sure thing, that would be $5, please.”  Mia pulled out her money. $3.00. Oops. $2 spent on honey.  Mia thought mother had sent extra money.
“I actually don’t have enough money!  Sorry!” Leo and Mia went home to get more money.  As they pulled into the driveway, they heard mother open the broken screen door.
“Mia!  You’re back!  Did you bring the beans?” mother asked.  Mia explained. Except for the honey part, of course.
“And to think!  That lady thought she could buy Leo!” Mia finished angrily.
“I could have sworn I gave you $5, but, Mia, you can’t keep that pig of yours forever.  It might be about time we sold it. We could use the extra cash. Tell you what, I’ll come with to the market and we can-”
“Leo is a he! And you’ll never sell him!  I won’t let you!” she interrupted. Mia ran into the house and up the bare stairs to the room she shared with  three younger siblings. She locked the door and sat on her bed, eyes wide, for a moment. Then she grabbed her old school backpack and emptied out all the folders and notebooks still inside.
“Mia, let me in!  Listen to me! You unlock this door right now!” she heard mother say.  Mia did not, however, follow mother’s instructions. Instead, she reached into the closet and grabbed a few outfits, which she put in the backpack.  Then she rushed to the window and opened it. Mia and Leo were on the second floor. They needed to get out without using the door. Mia stuck Leo in the backpack, closed it, and jumped.  Leo squealed. Mia ran to her bike and got on.
The ride was uneventful, and pretty soon Mia and Leo were at the playground, a rusty mess of slides and monkey bars.
“Hi, Mia!” Uh oh, Tina, a younger sister.
“Hi, Tina, I’m just here playing with Leo.”
“Can I play?”
“No.”
“Why?” Tina whined.
“Go away, Tina.” Tina reluctantly left.
“Now, Leo, we wait,” Mia said.  And so they waited for dark, eating the honey that Mia still had in her pocket.  Before long, the park emptied out and the sky darkened. Mia put Leo in the bike basket and they rode home.
Mia pulled out the keys from her backpack and unlocked the door.  During the school year, she often got home to an empty house and so had to have her own keys.  They had never been taken out of the backpack after the school year ended. Mia could hear her parents snoring gently in the next room.  She snuck into the kitchen on her tiptoes, every moment listening for her parents. Mia opened the pantry and pulled out dried fruit. She knew it would keep for a while, a necessity for her plans.  Then she grabbed some peanut butter and a few apples. Mia crept up the stairs, wincing at every creak. The snoring in the room below stopped. Mia froze. The door to her parents room opened. Mia was immensely grateful Leo was outside in his little pen instead of with her.  She climbed the rest of the way up the stairs just as mother came out of the room. Mia turned around.
“Oh, hi mother!” she said nervously.  Mother swept up the stairs and hugged her.
“You came home!  But where is that pig of yours?”
“I, um, I realized you were right.  And I… Sold him. To the green bean lady.” Mia sweated.  She hated lying to her parents. But it was worth it if it saved Leo.
“Oh, Mia, I am so proud!  How much did you get?” Mia froze.
“Um… I got...er... $10.  It’s... in my backpack.” She was in deep now.
“Well, let’s talk about this in the morning.  You go to bed now.”
“Actually, I was just going to put my backpack in my room,” she held up the backpack, “And then put my bike away.”
“You do that.  I will go back to bed as well.” Mother went back down the stairs and into her room.  Mia dropped off the backpack and went outside to put the bike away. But instead, she opened the garage and grabbed the family’s camping tent and a sleeping bag.  She put these in the pen with Leo. Then Mia wheeled her bike to next to the pen and went inside after closing the garage door. In her bed, Mia waited for an hour to make sure mother was asleep.  She almost dozed off a few times, but managed to stay awake. Then Mia grabbed her backpack and jumped out the window again. In the small yard, she grabbed her equipment and put Leo in the bike basket.  Soon they were riding to the park again.

This time, they never came back.  Within a few weeks, Mia and Leo became experts at hiding.  They moved camp often and Mia took small jobs to make enough money to keep them going.  They only got caught once, and escaped. And that is the story of Mia and her pig, Leo.

A Trio Forever by Genevieve Cadwell

There Once Was A Trio Of Friends,
Melanie, Alexandra And Celestyn,
The Closest Friends There Ever Were,

They’d Laugh And Play
And Sing All Day
The Closest Friends There Ever Were

Where A World Is A Place To Creativity by Genevieve Cadwell

Once upon a time, there was a lighthouse. And in the lighthouse was a magical pen. This pen, could write by itself. But if someone else wrote with the pen, anything they wrote would go to a magic land.

You see, the lighthouse and the pen were a team. A team that needed to stick together.

The lighthouse lit up the way to a mystical world. A world that no human has ever reached. A world where no human could reach. But in this mystical world, were things that were written. Written by this magical pen.

All things were fine until one day.

A nice little girl, with a head full of stories, was skipping down a dirt path. Then she saw the lighthouse.

She went in the open door and up the long, dark, twisty stairs. All the way to the tippy-top. But at the room at the tippy-top, was where the pen sat.

The little, curious girl saw the pen and started to write.

Suddenly, the lighthouse light started flashing. The written world was in danger! But the child, lost deep in thought, saw no flashing lights behind, only her story in front of her. But the pen still couldn't be in her hand. She had to stop writing!

Meanwhile, in storyland,some new characters were being made. There became a gorilla and a chipmunk. A squirrel and a rocketship. This child had a humongous imagination.

But at the lighthouse, pen still worried. But really, was anything extremely intense happening in storyland? Were things out of control? NO!!!

At the lighthouse, the little girl finished her epic story about animals flying to the moon.

But after she wrote the story, she found the lighthouse quite boring. So she decided to leave.
Once the little girl was far away from the lighthouse, the pen started writing.

The pen wrote a more informal story then usual. But it fit the occasion perfectly. In the story, the main character, Odessa, is specifically told to check on the magical storyland her world has. Then she is told to write about how well storyland was going. Then she is supposed to turn that experience into a letter. And she should send that letter to a magic pen.

So a very anxious pen, and a very anxious lighthouse, went to sleep.

 The next morning, a letter came in the mail. The letter was addressed to pen.

Dear Pen,
I was given great orders to help your magical world. Here is my report. All storyland is safe and sound. I was extremely proud to receive these orders. I hope I have served you well.
Sincerely,
Odessa

And with that, Pen and lighthouse, relaxed. All was well in the wonderworld.

Thursday, July 26, 2018

Commercial Script by Kali Sura and Britta Nathan

Kali: (Walks in with a box) Hey Britta!  Look what I got!
Britta: (Reading on the floor, Looks up) Hi!  What is that thing?
Kali: (Proudly) Thiiiiiiiiiis is my new LAVA LAMP! ( Holds out box for world to see)
Britta: (skeptical) Um… It kinda looks more like a box…
Kali: (Opens box) See?  LAVA LAMP!!!!!!!!!!
Britta: Ok, lets set it up (grab a stool)
Kali: (sets lava lamp on the stool)  TADA!
Britta: How much was it, Kali?
Kali: Supa dupa cheap!
Britta: Wow I want one too!

Kali: Buy a Livilava Lava Lamp today!

THE LIGHTHOUSE by Genevieve Cadwell

The Lighthouse Lamp
Lights The Way
To A Funny Camp
But Faraway
Is This Camp
And It Takes More Then One Day

The Lighthouse
Is Never Quiet Like A Mouse
It’s Loud And Noisy And Squeaks All Day
And It’s Not Anything Like Clay

Earth by Peyton Vincent


Earth so big and round and blue
Full of green, purple, red, and yellow too
Different cultures from all around
Will never ever make you frown
Earth so big and round and blue how I love you


Disaster Struck by Serena Sun

“Oh, great. I’m late again”, I glanced at my watch, 3:07.As I trudged to Chinese class, I could not understand why my dad made me go when he could teach me for free. I entered the building as a cold frown greeted me.

“You’re late again”, said Mrs. Huang. I took an empty seat in the back. The walls were pure white and I could tell everyone was trying their hardest to stay awake. I leaned back in my chair knowing these 2 hours would go by as fast as a tortoise could run a marathon.

“We were just finishing our paper lanterns. You may join us, Serena,” Mrs. Huang said.
I honestly did not want to make the craft we’ve made for the last 3 days, but I nodded and grabbed a sheet of paper from her desk. I could probably make these things with my eyes closed. I saw Tommy making origami stars in the corner. Then I heard a squeal coming from his direction. I saw one stuck right up in his nostril. The teacher screamed in horror as she saw Tommy panicking on the floor.

“OH MY, GET OFF THE FLOOR NOW! I am bringing you to the hospital. Now. Class, stay calm. Serena will cover for me. Is that ok with you? Okay thank you. I’ll be back in about … a few hours. Okay stay with me now Tommy you’ll be okay…”she left the room abruptly leaving me in shock. Me in charge? No way. I didn’t have the slightest idea how to teach. Well since I am in in charge I think I could change a few things…

As the teacher walked in the classroom I knew she couldn’t trust me anymore…

“What on earth happened…” speechless in horror she glanced at all the paper airplanes once in flight, the usual white walls now covered in finger paint and glue, the children having a spitball fight, that was followed by a food fight. I nearly thought she would faint right then and there

“Children, I will be sure all your parents hear about your behaviour. Meanwhile you will all sit around the room alone thinking about what you’ve done. Serena I need to talk to you.” I walked nervously to her desk.

 “What in the world happened?  I trusted you to cover for me while I was gone?’


 “Disaster struck. That’s what happened.”

The Haunted House by Kali Sura

In the town of Rosefield, a murder mystery lingers. They say that the old house on Winnipeg Lane is haunted. Legends surround Mrs.Mackpot’s old house. A 76 year old lady who lived alone in the house, her husband having died 4 years earlier from who knows what, many people actually felt sorry for her. That was until the beast came. The story goes that she was in the house one day cooking dinner when she heard a rustle behind her. Turning around she saw a hideous beast, half lion and half tiger. She screamed so loud that half the neighborhood heard her. That was the last they heard of her.

The next day the police arrived to find her dead body lying on the ground and no evidence of the beast having been there. Since then the story has been twisted and turned so much that no one’s really sure how it began or ended. One thing's for sure though, no matter who tells the story one detail has never changed. Nearly all of the versions of the story include a half lion and half tiger beast. Many a man has tried and failed to solve the mystery of who really killed Mrs. Mackpot. 

As far as anyone knows Mrs. Mackpot had no relatives and no friends plus the only people who knew her that well at all were her neighbors who had also been mysteriously killed the very same day. 10 years later a young detective by the name of Arnold Mcfinn came to the town of Rosefield to try to see if he could solve the mystery. The folks there muttered to each other:

“If the best detectives and policemen couldn't solve the mystery what makes him think he can?”

“He’s only 13! Who does he think he is Sherlock Holmes?”

“If I were him I would go right back to where I came from and leave this mystery unsolved or who knows what bad luck he might bring to this town if the murder finds out there's another detective after him!”

Arnold however was used to this kind of talk he experienced it wherever he went to solve a mystery, whether it was in his hometown Greenville, his best friend's town Berryville or his mother’s hometown of Huckleberry.

Arnold wasn’t just a regular old detective though he was the best detective this side of London. So on this fine spring day Arnold set off for Winnipeg Lane not knowing what was in store for him. He arrived in front of Mrs Mackpot’s old house and took a moment to look at the hunk of junk in front of him. Mrs Mackpot’s old house which was once the finest house on the street now looked like the wreckage of an old tree.

The roof was caved in, many shingles having fallen out. The front door hung off its hinges and the windows were all shattered, a good sign that some thievery had happened here. Sure enough when Arnold stepped through the front door many expensive furniture and table sets plus some antique relics had vanished from the living room.

Arnold then proceeded to examine the kitchen, the bedrooms and the attic all of which had been trashed as violently as the living room had been been with expensive jewelry and mirrors and dressers having vanished almost into thin air it seemed.

First Arnold examined the place where Mrs. Mackpot had been found dead, the kitchen. He checked every nook and cranny but found not a trace of the murder. As he examined the bedrooms and the attic Arnold didn’t find any trace of the beast that the people so claimed had killed the old woman. Not that he believed these rumors for who had ever seen a beast that was half lion and half tiger in Rosefield?

But as he made the to leave the attic he found tucked hidden inside an old chest a costume of half a lion and a costume of half a tiger. He examined the stitching and found that it was handmade by a person who clearly didn't know how to stitch. So he was right there was no beast just a person wearing a costume!

Ecstatic Arnold then proceeded to search the whole attic but was disappointed as he found nothing. However in Mrs. Mackpot’s bedroom he found tucked behind the dresser was a stack of letters she had written to her favorite author. Apparently she loved his books until he wrote a particularly gruesome one which she disliked so much that she made a review of it on Facebook and it had gone viral. In other words the author lost his job and his money because of Mrs. Mackpot.

An excellent motive Arnold thought. Arnold found his address marked in one of the letters and set off to find the author. He found the author hiding in a secret compartment in his bedroom. He was arrested without a word and Arnold became a hero in the town of Rosefield.

Book Review of HELLO UNIVERSE by Erin Entrada Kelly by Genevieve A. Cadwell


At first, I thought I wouldn’t like this book. It didn’t seem like a good book. I have to admit, I didn’t understand all of. I could have been I was reading too fast, or that I needed to look back. Or maybe it was just plain, old confusing.

One thing I really didn’t was hoe Chet “The Bull” Bullings got on the “What this book is about” page. He wasn’t that much of a main character. Although he did make the problem in the book.
HELLO UNIVERSE [turned out to be] a good book – but you really have to get into it before you understand it. [Edited by Guy Stewart]

[ORIGINAL REVIEW] At First I Thought I Wouldn’t Like This Book. It Didn’t seem Like A Good Book.  I Have To Admit, I Did’nt Understand all Of It.  It Could’ve Been I Was Reading To Fast, Or That I Needed To Look Back.  Or Maybe, It Was Just, Plain Ole Confusing.  One Thing I Really Did’nt get Was How Chet “The Bull” Bullings got On The “What This Book Is About” Page.  He Was’nt That Much Of A Main Character.  Although He did Make The Problem in The Book.  Hello Universe Is A Good Book-But You Really Have To Get Into It Before You Understand It.

Wednesday, July 25, 2018

What Should Writers Write With? by Genevieve Cadwell

They should Get A Bag
With Everything In It Galore
Choosing The Color
They Could Take It Around all Summer.

But What should Writers Put In It
That’s A Mighty Good Question You Asked.

Let’s Personalize It
Yes That Would Be Nice
But Don’t Forget Your utensils

We’ll Need Pencils And Pens
And some sticky Notes
But Don’t Forget
The Most Important Of Them all

Some Notebooks Would be Grand
And Any Other Tool You Could Think Of


This Bag Of Wonder
Serves To Be Quite Right
But Shows A True Thing Yes

A Writer Needs A Lot To Write
And Let’s Not even Start With Ideas……...

My Short Story by Genevieve Cadwell

Once upon a time, there was an author named Anastasia. One day, Anastasia was writing a story about a fox when the full moon awoke. It shined in the open window, lighting up the room. 

A minute later, Anastasia was no longer in her study. She was in a different world.
But where was she? She was lost in a that she had no knowledge of.
She decided to sit down and write for ideas.
But as she started to write, she heard a cry for help! She ran to see what it was, but instead, she saw…………
“Humpty Dumpty?”
“Please put me back together again! If you do, I can show you the way home.”

Anastasia bravely, agreed to try. And boy, what happened was amazing! It was unbelievable!

She put Humpty together!
“You have passed my test. You are a true author-and the youngest too. Now, the way home is quite simple, the way home, is simply, a little story.
Anastasia wrote. And she didn't stop until she had written herself, home.