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Showing posts with label Serena Sun. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Serena Sun. Show all posts

Friday, July 27, 2018

The Mystery of the Man Behind the Mask by Serena Sun

One eerie night,Detective Jana lay on her couch when she heard the doorbell ring.

“Hello, who’s there?” Jana opened the door and a plump old man entered.He wore worn out clothes and had a white goatee.

“Hello my name is Chester and am here to announce you’ve got a new case.”

“Have I even met you?why did you not contact me before you came?”

“First of all,this is my case we are talking about and second of all,I am your good friend Myah’s father.She told me I should talk to you about my case,in fact she refused to let me go anywhere else before I told you that my tower which holds my family is now bent out of shape and has a few stolen items that meant alot to me and my family.”

“I am sorry sir.Of course I will help you with this case.I will talk to Myah and set up a meeting to go deeper into this case.Please tell Myah and the rest of your family not to worry.Get some rest and I will see you tomorrow.Goodnight Chester.”

Detective Jana closed the door,excited for her new case.she went to bed and closed her eyes and had the weirdest dream… . . .
Ring,ring,ring!

“Oh my,what time is it? Oh no.I’m late for my meeting with Chester! Hello?’

“Good morning sleepy pants! I will give you 10 minutes to get ready.Come soon!”said Chester.

“ I am so sorry Mr.Chester! I forgot to set my alarm clock.Don’t worry I’ll be there in a flash!”

“ I am counting on it!”
“ See You soon,”as soon as I hung up,I grabbed my shoes,brushed my teeth,grabbed my detective bag, and was out the door.When I made it to their tower,I had to climb up their super long staircase.As I climbed the stairs, I noticed a few bricks were out of place and occasionally a crash of bricks falling.Now I knew what Chester was talking about.As I entered the room,a warm smile greeted me.

“Hey Jana! It has been so long since I have seen you!”

“Myah! I’ve missed you so much! Sorry for keeping you waiting,like I told Chester, I didn’t set my alarm clock so I came as quick as I could.As a matter of fact,I haven’t even had breakfast yet”,I chuckled at my foolishness.
“My then you must be famished!”Myah’s mom said as she entered the room, holding a laundry basket.
“Good morning Mrs.Denei.I really need to get started on the case. Please don’t feel the need to feed me.I will eat at my house.Now Myah,let’s start.”
“All right.Last night as I was brushing my teeth,I heard a strange noise coming from papa’s room.I slowly walked to his room,the noise got louder and louder.I bit my nails as I entered his room and all of a sudden the noise stopped!”

“That is very odd.I think the noise could reflect that your stolen items might have something to do with this.Is Chester home?”

“Did someone say my name?”Chester said as he entered the room.

“I did.Good morning.Myah just told me about a noise coming from your room last night and I was wondering if you heard anything after you called me?” I was starting to get suspicious.

“Um… I think I heard a little squeal at 12:00.”

“Are you sure you did not hear anything else?” He had a guilty grin on his face.

“Sir i need you to tell the truth,”all of a sudden, he started running and out of the blue,he jumped out of the window!

“Chester!”I ran after him as i heard myah and her mother weeping in the corner.Even though I was terrified, I had to act fast.I climbed down the stairs hoping i wasn’t to late.I ran out the door looking for any sight of him.I was too late.I climbed up the stairs,knowing that that guy was not Chester.The questions I now had were where is the real Chester and who was behind the mask?

Thursday, July 26, 2018

Disaster Struck by Serena Sun

“Oh, great. I’m late again”, I glanced at my watch, 3:07.As I trudged to Chinese class, I could not understand why my dad made me go when he could teach me for free. I entered the building as a cold frown greeted me.

“You’re late again”, said Mrs. Huang. I took an empty seat in the back. The walls were pure white and I could tell everyone was trying their hardest to stay awake. I leaned back in my chair knowing these 2 hours would go by as fast as a tortoise could run a marathon.

“We were just finishing our paper lanterns. You may join us, Serena,” Mrs. Huang said.
I honestly did not want to make the craft we’ve made for the last 3 days, but I nodded and grabbed a sheet of paper from her desk. I could probably make these things with my eyes closed. I saw Tommy making origami stars in the corner. Then I heard a squeal coming from his direction. I saw one stuck right up in his nostril. The teacher screamed in horror as she saw Tommy panicking on the floor.

“OH MY, GET OFF THE FLOOR NOW! I am bringing you to the hospital. Now. Class, stay calm. Serena will cover for me. Is that ok with you? Okay thank you. I’ll be back in about … a few hours. Okay stay with me now Tommy you’ll be okay…”she left the room abruptly leaving me in shock. Me in charge? No way. I didn’t have the slightest idea how to teach. Well since I am in in charge I think I could change a few things…

As the teacher walked in the classroom I knew she couldn’t trust me anymore…

“What on earth happened…” speechless in horror she glanced at all the paper airplanes once in flight, the usual white walls now covered in finger paint and glue, the children having a spitball fight, that was followed by a food fight. I nearly thought she would faint right then and there

“Children, I will be sure all your parents hear about your behaviour. Meanwhile you will all sit around the room alone thinking about what you’ve done. Serena I need to talk to you.” I walked nervously to her desk.

 “What in the world happened?  I trusted you to cover for me while I was gone?’


 “Disaster struck. That’s what happened.”

Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Save The Frog by Serena Sun

         Serena was walking on her way home from school when she noticed three boys who looked a year older than her,spitting on a dead frog.She watched in disgust as she told them to stop.they did not stop,in fact they actually pushed her back.She headed home speechless thinking she had to do something about this.She then new she wanted to make a club to help animals of all kinds.Big,small,hairy,slimy,reptile,mammal.She would go to school tomorrow to accept members.She had it all planned out as she went to bed.Yes she thought.I will make a difference…

Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Raccoon Looking Alien Climbs Skyscraper and Alien Invasion by Serena Sun

When mr.shark walked back from work, he saw a weird figure climbing up a building.He claims that it looked a bit like a  blue raccoon with six arms it started climbing so high he was sure it would fall and when it reached the top it leaped down and scurried into a little hole.Everyone was scared of an invasion as the government realized more of them were raining down… down… down….

All of the aliens caused drama especially when they ate all the iphones.Many people demand the government to do something and government surrenders…

Will they go away?

Serena Sun Interviews Peyton Vincent

Q : what has been your favorite moment as an 11 yr old?
A:getting a phone because I’ve wanted one for a while
Q: what is your least favorite food?
A: brussel sprouts and asparagus because I hate the taste.
Q: what is your favorite trip you’ve been on?
A:  Hawaii. it is so beautiful, I named my dog Maui after it
Q: what is something about this year you’ll never forget?
A: the friends I’ve made
Q:what is your biggest fear?
A: heights, it makes me feel sick
Q: if you could only eat 1 food for a week what would it be?
A: it would be steak
Q: what are your hobbies?
A: biking,writing,and running
Q:what is your biggest pet peeve?
A:when my sister eats my food
Q: what is your favorite food for breakfast?
A: I love waffles
Q: how old is your dog?

A: he is turning 1 in september

Monday, July 23, 2018

Raccoon Looking Alien Climbs Skyscraper and Alien Invasion! by Serena Sun

When Mr. Shark walked back from work, he saw a weird figure climbing up a building.He claims that it looked a bit like a  blue raccoon with six arms it started climbing so high he was sure it would fall and when it reached the top it leaped down and scurried into a little hole.Everyone was scared of an invasion as the government realized more of them were raining down… down… down….


All of the aliens caused drama especially when they ate all the iphones. Many people
demand the government to do something and government surrenders…

Will they go away?