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Showing posts with label Raghav Goel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Raghav Goel. Show all posts

Friday, July 27, 2018

A tornado of love and kindness by Raghav Goel

A tornado of love and kindness

Leaves not a path of destruction

But a path of reconstruction

Building relationships along the way

And causes love and play

Gift - giving and help too that's what you get

From a thing you cannot forget

So when you see this type of storm

You know it’s a swarm

Of kindness coming your way

Raghav, the Mummy, and the Business Card by Raghav Goel

I am Raghav Goel, a detective, but I am not like Encyclopedia Brown! He does his detective work in a suburb, but I work around the world.

So I had a case with a live mummy roaming Giza, a city in Egypt, terrorizing the citizens. So of course, I flew there.

When I arrived, I was shocked to see no one there, because Egypt was very popular. Not even one person was out; everyone was thinking the mummy was real, so I thought maybe the people saw the mummy.

So I knocked on a door and someone screamed. I said I was here to investigate about the mummy case, so she let me in.

“When did the mummy appear?” I said.

“Yesterday, the mummy came up in front of an audience and I was there. The mummy roared and everyone ran away!” she said.

“Thanks for the information”

“No problem, just please solve this mystery; no one is leaving their homes”

“Can I have the directions to the incident?”

“Sure. Take a right from here. Then, when you reach the stage, take a left”

“Bye”

Then, I went to the spot where the woman told me the incident happened and found a business card that said Sand 4 Life.

So, I called Sand 4 Life and got everyone that was on the card to come to the incident site. A piece of white cloth fell from one of the people.

Five seconds later, the mummy appeared and scared everyone. I went under the stage, waited for the mummy to turn around and I followed.

He led me to a lab where I found a bunch of mummy making equipment with a lot of the same white cloth and the mummy entered behind me and I said

“You are a fake mummy!”

“ROAR”

I ran out the door and pulled the linen cloth and I yelled “This is the mummy reveal!” and I pulled the bandages.

 A person emerged from it and everyone was shocked to see that it was a police officer. The police arrived and arrested the “mummy” and the mummy went to jail and everyone was happy. Another case solved by me.

Raghav, the Ekushka, and the Sari by Raghav Goel

I am Raghav Goel, a detective, but I am not like Encyclopedia Brown! He does his detective work in a suburb, but I work around the world.

So I had this one very strange case about a certain horse called an Ekushka that lives in Indonesia drowning people but it was usually 1 or 2 a year but that year there were 50. So of course, I flew over there.

After I reached the country, everyone was in their homes and I heard crying. I knocked on the door and a woman came to answer. She let me inside.

“(In Hindi) Hi. Can you please tell me about an Ekushka”.

“ (In Hindi) An Ekushka was a horse that looked like a horse used for riding, but it let a person ride them and they were led to the water and the victim was drowned”.

“Thank You”

I went to the swamp where people drowned but there was nothing but a linen cloth that came from a sari, Indonesian traditional clothing for women.

I went back to the village putting the cloth in my pocket and asked people who this could have belonged to. Someone said that it was from Capada, a clothing store, so I went to investigate.

I found the small shack that was working which was strange because no one was outside because of the Ekushka.

Suddenly, someone screamed.

Did someone else die? I went dashing towards the pond and the woman who screamed was right there. Someone was drowned by the Ekushka.

But when I took a glance at the woman, she had the same linen cloth for her sari with a rip in it. I yelled to get the police and 5 minutes later they arrived and arrested the woman for multiple times of murder.  The police asked how I knew it was her.

I said, “I first found the linen cloth.” Taking it out of my pocket, “I heard her scream that someone died. When I noticed the rip in her sari I knew she set this all up.”

The culprit hung her head low and said that she knew how to speak horse so she bribed the Ekushka infinite food to drown people.  So case closed, another mystery solved by Raghav Goel.

Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Ten Reasons Why I HATE Dogs by Raghav Goel

1.They lick and slobber. 
2. I am allergic to them (and so is 30% of the REST of the world).
3. They are very noisy because of the barking.
4. They can bite, which hurts.
5. They can have fleas in their fur, which can cause diseases.
6. They poop wherever they want.
7. The fourth most common phobia is the fear of dogs (right after germs, small spaces, and thunder and lightning)
8. When it is a thunderstorm they do crazy and are very hard to control.
9. Lots of people have had bad experiences with dogs.
10. They used to hunt us.

An Interview With Lucas Weidner by Raghav Goel

Q: If you got a frog from a moving neighbor what would you do?

A: keep it because it’s kind

Q: where is your favorite vacation spot?

A: Key west cruise

Q: What would you do when a tornado strikes?

A: go to basement

Q: what would you do if you received a million dollars?

A: buy lots of books , charity, then give my parents a Tesla

Q: what are your hobbies?

A: reading and bike rides

Q: What annoys you most?

A: People that think they know everything

Q: What is your dream vacation?

A: Iceland because of the natural beauty.

Q: what would you do if a thief came to your house?

A: protect family

Q: what do you want to go to college for?

A: computer science and environmental engineering

Q: what is your favorite book?

A: The Martian

Monday, July 23, 2018

Ghost Eats Child, Government Surrenders! by Raghav Goel

The government surrendered after an alien on April 28 2018 after it ate a child in his bedroom after it went through a window starting  when a lightning bolt stuck the science museum which made a awkward light land on top of the child’s house but suddenly a green form squirmed out and took the shape of a monstrous alien which freaked out the child and then the alien ate the poor child.

The alien was way too scary for the government to do anything so no one decided to help with the situation and the government gave the ruling over to the alien.